One of my ideas for task one is my high school band directors. They were very influential to to me and challenged my performance ability. I chose to go to college to be a music major in education because of their teaching abilities. They would criticize my work ethic and helped me mature into a responsible adult. This would be a very good topic for task one because I have a lot of memories to write about and experiences in band. I might have trouble with the flow of the memories and experiences. I anticipate on troubles with flow of the paper and not being so choppy. I have had troubles in the past with papers being choppy. I do not have many questions for task one.
Another topic I could use for task one could be my grandfather because he has taught me many things threw life. He has taught me responsibility and respect. I have many stories about him and with him. I could talk about his life and how he helped with me threw mine so far. I might have a problem with getting details. I could resolve that by phone calls and family research. I do not have questions for task one at this point.
A topic I could choose for task one could be my father and the things he has done for me threw life and stories I share with him. I could talk about my first car and how he helped me “trick” it out. I could use details about my car and what we did to make it unique. I might have troubles with details of his life but I can resolve those by phone calls threw family members.
Hi Tyler,
ReplyDeleteI am definitely interested in reading your first draft if you were to write about your HS band director(s). I do have a question though, is this about one specific band director or multiple?
If you were to select this focus for this writing assignment, I would encourage you to select brief stories (that support your thesis) and that pertain to your HS band director(s).
It appears that your focus may be:
"They were very influential to to me and challenged my performance ability. I chose to go to college to be a music major in education because of their teaching abilities. They would criticize my work ethic and helped me mature into a responsible adult."
I would narrow this focus to: How my HS band director(s) challenged my performance ability.
Either way it is up to you.
Ms. Chastain